Blog Tip Thursday: Writing Better Blog Posts

BlogTipsBadge2Every week, we share one of our favorite ‘how-to’ posts about blogging, social media, and the community we LOVE to love. Our desire is you consider HLB a resource in your efforts to blog BETTER – we want to be stronger bloggers ourselves, and we see the desire for stronger posts and cleaner designs. We understand wanting to know the BEST plug-ins, aps, programs, and resources to keep your site in tip top shape. And nothing makes us nerd-out more than getting super meta about all things blog-world. We’re not experts, we’re simply bloggers ourselves – sharing our own experiences, tips and tricks of the trade each Thursday with a BTT post. We welcome your questions, your suggestions for future topics, and your ‘how-to’ post recommendations to Emily!

This week’s post is from Ashley who writes at A Lady Goes West.


Writing! Now writing is something I like to write about. Words matter. Writing is important. And being that I used to work in the corporate world as a copywriter and a communications manager, I’ve always been into the written word. (A dork? Perhaps so.)

That’s why I knew that writing was a great topic for me to talk about a few weeks ago when I was invited to speak at IDEA BlogFest with Sweat Pink in LA. Today, I’m going to give you a brief overview of that presentation. And hey, even if you don’t have a blog, you just may learn something about how to craft the messages that you do have to write in your daily life.


I was asked to speak as part of the “Lightning Round,” in which I had about five minutes to teach the audience of nearly 200 healthy-living bloggers something they need to know. I had pre-created and submitted 20 slides ahead of time, which automatically moved forward every 15 seconds, as I stood on the stage and shared my thoughts. I did a few run-throughs of the presentation leading up to the event, to make sure I knew what I was saying would match up with the slides, and it went off without a hitch. I actually really enjoyed it and would love to do more presentations like that in the future. (I guess all that teaching group fitness on the stage has helped me to be confident on a microphone in front of a bunch of eyes!)

How to write a better healthy-living blog in seven steps via A Lady Goes West

Scenes from the Lightning Round at IDEA BlogFest 2015, in which I was sporting an awesome prAna outfit provided to me by the Sweat Pink team.

Here’s what I presented in that very short amount of time …


When it comes to blogging, yes you can write whatever you want, however you want to write it, because your blog is your blog. But as bloggers, if we take some cues from the marketing world to sell ourselves with our writing, we can give our readers what they want, and they’ll keep coming back for more.

While you can still have an informal and conversational style in your writing on your blog, using the following tips will help you to increase your following by consistently delivering excellent posts …


Give your readers a hint at what they will find in the post. And give them a reason to click through to your actual blog post if they follow you by scrolling their Bloglovin’ accounts, emails or even their Facebook feeds. Your headline should …

  • Ask a question.
  • Pose a need.
  • Create urgency and a time-sensitive nature.
  • Be short and on one line. Strive for five to seven words total.

For example, instead of using “Hydration tips” as a headline, how about “Five hydration tips you need this summer,” which is much more enticing.


Although we’d love to think that people read every word we write, that’s not always true. Therefore, as smart bloggers, it’s our duty to write our posts so that people can skim through them. We want people to be able to hit the highlights with some leading narration, so that they leave satisfied at the end.

  • Add subheads, which are bolded and in a larger typeface than the body font, and which guide people along the content. (Like I’m doing in this post.)
  • Use bulleted lists. (Like this one you’re reading now.)
  • Make lists with numbers. (Again, like this post.)
  • Separate your thoughts into short paragraphs. (Yup.)


Give your readers what they came for. If you’re trying to teach them, make sure you actually give helpful information in your post. If you’re just telling a story about your weekend, make it clear whether it was a good one or not and have a beginning, a middle and an end.

  • Have a goal in mind for each post as to what you want readers to come away with.
  • Tell your readers what you plan to tell them in the beginning, then tell them, then tell them what you told them at the end. (See what I did there?)
  • Write a good concluding statement with a call-to-action, if there is one.
  • Tell a narrative, by giving insight into your experiences.


There’s nothing worse than visiting a blog (or reading anything at all) and seeing a major typo in the headline or first sentence. While mistakes happen all the time, you can eliminate many of them with just a few extra minutes in the editing process. It’s just so important.

  • Read your posts out loud before hitting publish.
  • Cut out unnecessary words and phrases that don’t make sense or are cumbersome.
  • Find a fellow blogger who is willing to do a peer-review arrangement and agree to read each other’s posts before they go live.
  • Ask a family member or a friend to read your drafts before you finalize them. (True story: My Mom reads almost all of my posts before they are sent out!)

Click here to read Ashley’s other great tips for writing great blog posts.


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